I read this on PM & commented, but I will add my comments here as well...

Terry,
This was great! The shower scene was beautiful. I loved it when Michael called Annie "my beautiful aqua goddess." I also loved this description of his wet hair..."His long hair was wet and when he gave it a shake it looked like a lion’s mane flowing down around his neck and back. With the water running off his shoulders and chest, he looked like some sort of mythical beast ready to roar." Just beautiful!